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Post by shura on Oct 5, 2005 17:54:23 GMT -5
im getting there
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Post by angel on Oct 5, 2005 17:55:29 GMT -5
kkk
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Post by shura on Oct 5, 2005 19:25:39 GMT -5
okay if anyone has a problem with me using ther name please pm me. thank you
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Post by Anritha on Oct 7, 2005 14:15:26 GMT -5
It's very good so far, and is exactly what is going on in the site. Or, what was going on. I like how you used lines that we actually used and put emotions that our wolves really felt.
Though, you do seem to use vargs a lot. You should spread out your vocabulary by using wolves, fae (female wolf) and other wolf-terms.
But on the most part it is very good so far.
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Post by Amethist on Oct 7, 2005 15:33:45 GMT -5
I feel so rejected.... *cries dramatically* lol j/k, I do wanna kno if Amethist will ever make it into that story or not though.... Shadow you may not have many lines, but at least you're in it... lol
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Post by Anritha on Oct 7, 2005 21:17:34 GMT -5
Hurry up and create another few paragraphs!
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Post by shura on Oct 8, 2005 20:05:50 GMT -5
lol i will get there, currently i am at my dad's house so i can't write anything until i go to my mom's house, i will soon though. By the end of the week, the next couple paragraphs will be up.
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Post by Anritha on Oct 9, 2005 14:03:23 GMT -5
OOC: You know what, I'm really bored. Since I have nothing better to do, STORY TIME! I just need approval to all of your names personallities, and later, when this book sells for a gabajillion dollars, I'll donate 10% to Way of the Wolf. Ha, like I'll publish it. Anywho, I need permersion to use your names... do I have it?
Main Names I need: Shetan Lota Shadow Sakura
^-- Yeah, those are like the main, original wolves that were first here when Anritha got to Alden. Still, I need all your names, so post if I can use them.
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Post by feather on Oct 9, 2005 14:12:43 GMT -5
you have my permission to use my name
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Post by Anritha on Oct 9, 2005 14:22:49 GMT -5
Yeah! One down, like twenty to go!
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Post by feather on Oct 9, 2005 14:27:32 GMT -5
lol well there isnt really that much people now so it might be easy
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Post by Anritha on Oct 9, 2005 16:23:24 GMT -5
Well, since the first few paragraphs have nothing to do with any of you I can post them. I will post chapter one when I complete it. (It is really long o-o;)
Prologue: She opened her eyes; she was surrounded by four other wolves. They were all drinking milk from the mother wolf. “Anritha sweetie, drink up, you need your strength.” said the mother wolf. Anritha, so that is my name, thought the newborn to herself. It turned out Anritha was now seven days of age; she had just got her seeing and hearing then. Her mother smiled at the confused little pup. “Anritha, you are the last one to get all of your senses, no matter. Meet your siblings, Frilltoe, Ronsing, Dyle, and Yolanda,” she told her daughter, indicating each wolf a nudge of her head.
It was a family of gray wolves, except the father was a black wolf. None of the children got his pelt color though. Anritha however, got his brilliant golden eye color. Her siblings all had shades of green and blue eyes like their mother. Frilltoe looked exactly like her mother, not a difference in the world. Yolanda had green eyes and dark brown fur appose to the light brown fur like Dyle and Ronsing. Anritha walked over and drank the milk just like the rest of the newborns. Everything was so confusing, as it should be to such a young fae. A new world, a new life, it was all so befuddling. When she was full, Anritha got up, and walked around, even though it was difficult. At such a young age, even walking was hard. Soon though, soon it would be easier.
A month gone by, she could run and communicate. Anritha’s mother was named Anita, which she had found out two weeks earlier. Her father was named Namiro, which she found out at the same time. She was currently running around with her siblings, just exploring. Later, her parents would teach them all how to hunt, but that wouldn’t be for quite some time. Anritha was a newborn wolf, her life was as peaceful as it could get, and you could relax without any doubt.
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Post by feather on Oct 9, 2005 16:44:34 GMT -5
nice its good!
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Post by shadow on Oct 9, 2005 19:56:48 GMT -5
It is really good. And yes, you do have permission to use my name in your story.
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Post by shura on Oct 9, 2005 22:08:58 GMT -5
you can use cocola, shura, and farfalle. and i like it! ok tommorrow i should have the next ouple of paragraphs.
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